Moe from California

Well

A. It's a run on sentence.
B. "as much as just yesterday" really?
C. Very awkwardly constructed.
D. There are errors in it I can identify but I don't even know what terms to use to describe why they are wrong.
E. "Some people have a way with the English language, other people .... um .... just don't have way" ... I guess.
F. It could be used in a text book as an example question for " how many problems can you find in this sentence? " but there is no definitive answer.
G. Almost forgot ... you ended in a ......... wait for it ................. preposition ROTHFLMAO LOLLOLOLOLOLOL

;)
You are obviously not from Boston.
 
Welcome Moe.

You have an excellent taste in cars IMHO. I hope you'll find your C soon.
 
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